DoctNik's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[How To Use Adobe Animate 101]

Not the funniest animation I've seen, but it wasn't that bad. You're awful at voice acting, but it still somehow made the cartoon all the funnier. Keep it up mate.

HipnikDragomir responds:

Thanks. I didn't think I was that bad :c Although, the line "And finish it" was edited because I forgot what it was.

[STUPID GAME JOKES]

They were all pretty funny, but it was the microtransaction joke that made me laugh.

[TD-Appearances]

For my first Technical Dave movie I have to say it was really funny! I've always been a fan of that snapshot style of animation and of really stupid rants so it's like the best of both worlds, you know?

[A Little Gaming Moment]

The first problem I have with this film is the fight scene, or at least the end of it. The POV suddenly switches to the bully which to me was a stupid idea, it makes the film look amaturish and not thought out. You could have given the same feeling if you did a top-down perspective or a side perspective, hell, even an over-the-shoulder perspective on the bully! Whenever you make a scene in the future, you should try and think of the different angles of the camera and choose the one that you feel conveys the feeling of the scene the strongest.

Next we have a rather simple but very, very, very noticable error. The funeral house. its just to detailed, it contrasts with the simple animation and makes an eyesore out of itself! Stylizing your animation is vital for a beautiful and flawless production, keep this in mind during future projects.

Well, that's about it. Everything else was fine and well animated, all in all a fair animation, its welcome change to the usual senseless violence or fart jokes that inhabit many other movies. I can't wait to watch part two.

TheExtreamH responds:

Thanks for the very in depth response. I'll take all what you said on board for the production of part 2.

[Incompetence]

The music seemed to calm and did nothing o help the animation, as for your animating, it was fine except for your running animation for our sad little protaganist. The idea was fine but it was to dependant on bomb guys bad aim. All in all this is an almost fair animation, but not quite as funny as I had hoped. In the future I hope you strengthen your skills, also, as a side note, you should ask someone on new grounds you could use some of their music, or even make some for you, this is a friendly place I'm sure one will help you out Because royalty free music is awful.

Lizzaroro responds:

Sorry you felt that way about it. Thanks for your feedback though. I'll definitely keep those in mind when making my next animation.

[Welcome to React World™]

nice animation, very funny, and lovely voice acting. Love it. Love you.

[REACT WORLD REALITY (FINE BROS PARODY) - DAGames]

Although the animation was not the focal point of the movie, im still happy to say it was great!

The voice acting was also amazing, it made it so much funnier!

Your script was well written and the story was fucking brilliant.

Best movie evar 10/10! Even if it was a bit late, lolz.

[Why i didn't like FROZEN!]

The animation was small but enough to make it work.

Your charcter design is so original and so awesome. Its simplicity makes it all the more perfect and, of course, quicker to draw!

the voice acting was ok, nothing exceptional though. I also noticed right off the bat how quiet it is. My earbuds are at max volume, but I still can barely hear!

That singing, by the way, fucking amazing. I loved this animation, especially the end!

[Smashy Claw - Subordinate]

The song was the highlight of your vid. I hate when producers think that quantity is better than quality because it is most definitely not.

The animation was rushed and it amateurish. The tatto goes over his mouth when he was daydreaming. The birds look like they were drawn by children, that intro was lame and uninspiring. Nothing in this garbage seemed redeemable.

You should stop uploading every tuesday and do it every month, or better yet, just keep at it until its actually finished. This was a tragedy if you ask me, take time on your next piece.

Quality over quantity, not the other way around.