DoctNik's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jamaica-Man]

you put a lot of effort in this and I respect that. for an early animation it wasn't that bad, I mean, you should look at the crap that was posted here in the early days of Newgrounds, it was poorly animated, poorly written, and poorly voiced. But when you look at them now they're incredible. why? Because they kept making more animations and after each one they got just a little bit better. So don't give up, just keep making animations and listening to peoples advice.

Rojay101 responds:

thank you, I will make more even if I should get a series of one stars

[Typical Work Day]

There should've been more detail, such as placing borders around objects (I could barely tell that the desk had a computer on it.) You should also consider making a background for your animations. Other than that, I reall just didn't find it that funny.

Flanamations responds:

Thank you for giving me some honest criticism! Im really tired of people just telling me "Oh thats really good"

[How To Use Adobe Animate 101]

Not the funniest animation I've seen, but it wasn't that bad. You're awful at voice acting, but it still somehow made the cartoon all the funnier. Keep it up mate.

HipnikDragomir responds:

Thanks. I didn't think I was that bad :c Although, the line "And finish it" was edited because I forgot what it was.

[STUPID GAME JOKES]

They were all pretty funny, but it was the microtransaction joke that made me laugh.

[TD-Appearances]

For my first Technical Dave movie I have to say it was really funny! I've always been a fan of that snapshot style of animation and of really stupid rants so it's like the best of both worlds, you know?

[A Little Gaming Moment]

The first problem I have with this film is the fight scene, or at least the end of it. The POV suddenly switches to the bully which to me was a stupid idea, it makes the film look amaturish and not thought out. You could have given the same feeling if you did a top-down perspective or a side perspective, hell, even an over-the-shoulder perspective on the bully! Whenever you make a scene in the future, you should try and think of the different angles of the camera and choose the one that you feel conveys the feeling of the scene the strongest.

Next we have a rather simple but very, very, very noticable error. The funeral house. its just to detailed, it contrasts with the simple animation and makes an eyesore out of itself! Stylizing your animation is vital for a beautiful and flawless production, keep this in mind during future projects.

Well, that's about it. Everything else was fine and well animated, all in all a fair animation, its welcome change to the usual senseless violence or fart jokes that inhabit many other movies. I can't wait to watch part two.

TheExtreamH responds:

Thanks for the very in depth response. I'll take all what you said on board for the production of part 2.

[Incompetence]

The music seemed to calm and did nothing o help the animation, as for your animating, it was fine except for your running animation for our sad little protaganist. The idea was fine but it was to dependant on bomb guys bad aim. All in all this is an almost fair animation, but not quite as funny as I had hoped. In the future I hope you strengthen your skills, also, as a side note, you should ask someone on new grounds you could use some of their music, or even make some for you, this is a friendly place I'm sure one will help you out Because royalty free music is awful.

Lizzaroro responds:

Sorry you felt that way about it. Thanks for your feedback though. I'll definitely keep those in mind when making my next animation.

[Welcome to React World™]

nice animation, very funny, and lovely voice acting. Love it. Love you.