The style of the animation was very nice, simple yet beautiful. However, the animation itself was repetitive and choppy, you should've just made an artwork.
The style of the animation was very nice, simple yet beautiful. However, the animation itself was repetitive and choppy, you should've just made an artwork.
thanks
Was this a reference o an earlier animation? I feel like I'm not getting what the joke is. The animation was fluid and lovely to look at, let's hope your next animation is just as well made but with a better joke than this.
That was prince eric from little mermaid, and the inside joke was how he didnt realize ariel was the one that saved him from drowning. So when me and my gf watch it(which is a lot), shes always pissed at eric for not recognizing ariel and dragging on the story, in short, fuck prince eric. ive had this vid for a while and just posted it, didnt think every comment would be a series of "i dont get it" and me having to explain it lol
It was a good, quick laugh with a slightly relatable joke and a slightly unique character design. I would've liked to have had louder sound effects or quieter background music, as it is I can barely hear his foot steps or excited gasp over the odd soundtrack.
Thanks! It was just something I threw together, so I didn't really work on character design, but I did think about lowering the music volume, I just never got around to it.
I've heard awful things about the animator, mostly how he's a racist and shit, but who cares! That was funnier than Conan, Kimmel, Fallon, Cobair, John Oliver, Bill Maher and that one lady on tbs who thinks she's funny all combined!
I'm not racist! D:
you put a lot of effort in this and I respect that. for an early animation it wasn't that bad, I mean, you should look at the crap that was posted here in the early days of Newgrounds, it was poorly animated, poorly written, and poorly voiced. But when you look at them now they're incredible. why? Because they kept making more animations and after each one they got just a little bit better. So don't give up, just keep making animations and listening to peoples advice.
thank you, I will make more even if I should get a series of one stars
There should've been more detail, such as placing borders around objects (I could barely tell that the desk had a computer on it.) You should also consider making a background for your animations. Other than that, I reall just didn't find it that funny.
Thank you for giving me some honest criticism! Im really tired of people just telling me "Oh thats really good"
Not the funniest animation I've seen, but it wasn't that bad. You're awful at voice acting, but it still somehow made the cartoon all the funnier. Keep it up mate.
Thanks. I didn't think I was that bad :c Although, the line "And finish it" was edited because I forgot what it was.
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