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[A Little Gaming Moment]

The first problem I have with this film is the fight scene, or at least the end of it. The POV suddenly switches to the bully which to me was a stupid idea, it makes the film look amaturish and not thought out. You could have given the same feeling if you did a top-down perspective or a side perspective, hell, even an over-the-shoulder perspective on the bully! Whenever you make a scene in the future, you should try and think of the different angles of the camera and choose the one that you feel conveys the feeling of the scene the strongest.

Next we have a rather simple but very, very, very noticable error. The funeral house. its just to detailed, it contrasts with the simple animation and makes an eyesore out of itself! Stylizing your animation is vital for a beautiful and flawless production, keep this in mind during future projects.

Well, that's about it. Everything else was fine and well animated, all in all a fair animation, its welcome change to the usual senseless violence or fart jokes that inhabit many other movies. I can't wait to watch part two.

TheExtreamH responds:

Thanks for the very in depth response. I'll take all what you said on board for the production of part 2.

[Incompetence]

The music seemed to calm and did nothing o help the animation, as for your animating, it was fine except for your running animation for our sad little protaganist. The idea was fine but it was to dependant on bomb guys bad aim. All in all this is an almost fair animation, but not quite as funny as I had hoped. In the future I hope you strengthen your skills, also, as a side note, you should ask someone on new grounds you could use some of their music, or even make some for you, this is a friendly place I'm sure one will help you out Because royalty free music is awful.

Lizzaroro responds:

Sorry you felt that way about it. Thanks for your feedback though. I'll definitely keep those in mind when making my next animation.

[Star Wars fans thought they were safe...]

C3-POs arm is red... best star wars quote ever! Lol. You sound like vanoss, btw.

The animation was pretty good for being 3-D.

The voice acting was wonderful! And the script? Beautiful! Over all wonderous film, good job!

404Tales responds:

First time anyone has ever called my work wondrous! Thanks!

[Drunk Vader]

Woulve liked to have heard mumbling as those guys were talking in the background there in the begining. The animation was pretty cool, if a bit sloppy. The voice acting was exceptional as far as I'm conserned. And the jokes were fucking hilarious! Oh, and don't forget I could kill you at any moment with my MAGIC BRAIN POWERS!

DakNJaxterLazerNails responds:

Thanks a lot.

[DEFAULT GUYS: RMCAD CONTEST]

Sorry bout the deadline m8, but this was still a fine cartoon if it helps!

I like how the characters came up with a plan and gave up halfbecause it was to late lol.

Although the animation and story great the voice acting was terrible. But I understand you were sick and that you had no time to rest, so its cool.

I hope keep making movies! never giv up on yo dreems, homie!

skuff196 responds:

Thanks!!! can I ask which lines you thought were particularly bad? I know the "were both cartoons" part is definantley one of them

[Contra 3: Is too F** Hard]

I personally fuckin despise and all the days I spent playing it getting nowhere. But this animation was awesome! It had sub par voice talent but that's nothing compared to the animation and the Special FX!

Listen, animator, you are bad at voice acting, stick to animation.

4TAKEN responds:

Thanks for your words, it really help us get better. =)
Really? some people think the voice acting was good, sorry you didn't like it. =/