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I listened to some of Gary's music and found it sadistically satisfying, the way he hides dark meaningful lyrics in poppy beats like he did with "Cars". I plan on listening to his other songs at some point as well. Your piece lacked the lyrical and musical combo that made Gary worth a gander, yours came off as solidly upbeat instead deceitfully upbeat making it more confusing than anything.

maxxpump responds:

You are comparing me to ancient Numan works, like indeed friends electric and Cars. But my inspiration comes from his newer work like "Love Hurt Bleed" and "I am Dust" which he released in 2013. Agreed i am nowhere as dark as Numan, and might not have the sound correct but the structure comparing to his newer work is there. I'm releasing a newer piece tonight which is more closer to Numans industrial Tube Way Army style, using new EFX and SFX and hope it is much better received than this piece I did last night. Plus I'm no vocalist and if you listened to any of my failed attempts at singing in the past you would understand. I may create lyrics for tonights song and see how it goes down...

A dark poem that I can sadly relate to, keep up the honest beats bro.

I like the beginning and the ending, I just couldn't feel the middle part for some reason, its simple rhythmic style would be brilliant as an intro though so no harm done.

RyeGuyHead responds:

Probably because I march to the beat of my own drum... :)

Thanks for the rate & review!

The ghostly moans feel more awkward and melodramatic than spooky, and most of your piece seems to have more sounds than necessary making it almost incomprehensible. But I found the chaos oddly satisfying, and the moaning got a little better towards the ending. Better luck on future projects.

DanielCiurlizza responds:

My first newgrounds review ever! Thanks for taking the time to write all that, man! Glad the chaos worked for you.

Spooky but repetitive, simple and largely unsatisfying.

I like helping others, probably why I'm training to be an MA. I love art just as much as people though, whether it be a song, film, story, or painting I'm one who appreciates all forms of creativity!
Keep on creating! Art matters! You matter!

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Age 25, Male

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Phoenix JobCorps, got my HSE

Arizona, USA

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