It's interesting how you space your hook with these long instrumental intervals, really left time to think about what you were saying. I also think it leaves too much time, but it's a smooth beat, not inventive enough to stop me from wondering how long this song is though.
I like how you leave lyrics in the end, but I hate how they fade off. It felt like what you were saying was meaningless.
With THAT said: the beat is solid, you speak clearly, you were creative. Honestly liked it, please keep creating.